Comic 21 - #1 The C Word: Page 19

15th Mar 2012, 2:29 AM in #1 The C Word
#1 The C Word: Page 19
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)
<<First Latest>>

Author Notes:

wildcard 15th Mar 2012, 2:29 AM edit delete
wildcard
Always read the fine print.

Comments:

demontales 16th Mar 2012, 12:15 AM edit delete reply
demontales
Haha, that face in the last panel! I've probably already said that, but you're really improving with expressions.

That may just be me, but Scratch's position in the mirror seems a little off. I understand you needed to put her in frame, but she doesn't look like she's looking at him.
wildcard 16th Mar 2012, 6:47 PM edit delete reply
wildcard
I hear you on the mirror; it was awkward given that her actual position should really be aligned with him but I figured that would look too cluttered, while omitting her altogether seemed even worse.

The idea that her viewpoint is angled slightly might have worked better had I introduced perspective to the wall/mirrors, so given a chance I’ll rework it along those lines ;) Thanks for criticism anyhow!
hrwilliams 4th Apr 2012, 5:47 PM edit delete reply
hrwilliams
I didn't look too closely at the mirror. I was diggin' those Terminator lenses. Beautiful page, really!
wildcard 9th Apr 2012, 12:31 AM edit delete reply
wildcard
Heh, it's difficult to escape the whole Terminator thing when it comes to retinal HUD's XD Thanks a bunch anyway!